I feel like this should either be

You may delete offline keyservers from your keyserver list

or

You may delete an offline keyserver from your keyserver list

Just my opinion though (cc @ashoat)

Thanks @rohan, you're right that the original sentence here is broken English. I wish @ginsu had caught it before putting up the diff. I appreciate that you brought it to my attention either way.

Let's go with @rohan's second suggestion. @ginsu, going forward please take copy a bit more seriously. I recognize that this screen is not visible outside of staff currently, but I highly doubt that anybody would have taken a deeper pass before we launch it more broadly.

It's your responsibility to check copy and I expect that you'll do better going forward, whether that means using something like Grammarly, ChatGPT, or simply reading each word out carefully.

Thanks for this catch @rohan. That's my bad for not catching this sooner. I had assumed that this copy had already been reviewed/was good and just copied it from directly from the Figma, but moving forward I'll always make sure to double check/be more careful when dealing with copy